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Teacher Comment by English Teacher Jamie on August 15, 2012 at 17:24

You're welcome! I'm very happy to hear that.

Comment by hendayani lestari on August 15, 2012 at 17:20

ok....I do understand...thanks. You make me eager to learn. Thank you so much teacher...

Teacher Comment by English Teacher Jamie on August 15, 2012 at 17:14

A scene (noun) is a place where something occurs, a view or a picture.

Scenery (noun) the picturesque or appealing landscape/ surroundings of a place.

Comment by hendayani lestari on August 15, 2012 at 17:07

thanks so much teacher, but please can you explain what is different between scene and scenery?

Teacher Comment by English Teacher Jamie on August 15, 2012 at 16:52

Well done Hendayani!

Your writing style is very nice. 

In number 2 we would usually write prefer instead of like more. Number 4 should say ...your skin will burn.

Number 5 could be written as The scenery is beautiful. or This is a beautiful scene. Nice use of someday in question 5. Well done!

Comment by hendayani lestari on August 15, 2012 at 16:39

1. The weather is very hot

2. I like more to drink a glass of coconut ice in this weather

3. To stay in this hotel must be very expensive

4. Don't forget to use your sunblock or your skin will be burn

5. This is a beautiful scenery, I wish I could go there someday.

I'm not sure this is some true sentences. Please check them teacher...