It was a beautiful autumn day and I was taking my dog for a nice walk in the fields. The sun was shining and there wasn't a cloud in the sky - a perfect day. I was walking along a footpath when all of a sudden my dog ran ahead of me. He was sniffing around an object he'd found on the ground. What could it be? I was worried my dog might eat it so I caught up with him to see what it was! It was an old mobile phone. I picked it up to take a look and it started ringing! I looked around but there was nobody nearby, so I decided to answer it. I pressed the answer button and listened...
What happened next?
Who did this phone belong to?
Use your imagination to complete this story. You can make this story funny, serious or scary! What do you think happened next?
Hey Doggy! Come here! Give me that. Good boy! What is that? Let me see... A mobile phone. Hello! hello! The answering machine... "Hi honey! Where are you? I'm waiting for you darling. Hurry up! Dinner is ready." Suddenly Doggy run toward the lake. Doggy come here! Doggy don't stop so I follow him. What a surprise! There was a man lying on the ground near a tree. He seems to have a lot of pain. Can I help you sir? I fell while jogging, he said. I hurt my ankle so I cannot walk. Ok sir, my car is near here, I will drive you to the hospital. Oh by the way, is this yours? Yes thanks, he said I lost it. So you must call your wife, I said to him. Ok sir, hold on me and let's go....
The dog is the hero in this story. :)
Very nice story again Coco. Well written and very easy to follow. I like it!
Thank you very much Teacher Jamie!!!
The voice said "Help, I have fallen down a very large hole and broken my leg". I looked at the phone, it was the same as mine. My phone had a flat battery. I removed the battery from the phone I had found. I placed that battery in my phone. I threw the old phone and my old battery on the ground and walked away. I was no good at first aid anyway.
Nice funny story, but poor man I can imagine he is still waiting for help... :)
They don't call that phone a brick for nothing!
I pressed the answer button and listened..There was a voice , it sounds a little bit strange. I guess it was a man. He asked me " Do you like real adventure games" ? This phone is your first step to a big adventure. I was so surprised that I couldn't answer immediatly. My dog began to bark , he starts sniffing around and ran away the path to the forest. I tried to call him back but he didn't listen to me. Than all of a sudden the man began talking to me again. He said " follow your dog and you'll get the next clue. Now I was really afraid. Why did he know that my dog rans away ?
And how is this man? What do you think happened next ?
Oooh, this is an interesting start to a story. It reminds me of the SAW films - but I hope it doesn't end in the same way!
Now I want to phone somebody up and quote the lyrics to Call me Maybe!
I hope the cheese tart was on the house! This is one of those stories where all the pieces fit nicely together at the end. I like the idea!
I would have added a twist at the end. Daniel is actually your husband! There would have been a very different ending to your story!
Yoda may be on to something there.
As long as you keep the dog and get everything on the house then everything will be alright in the end. :)
I pressed the answer button and listened....There was no sound in the beginning. I spoke into the phone and tried to understand what the hell was going on! no answer again. I tended to hang up then a scary mysterious grin came out of the phone. I was so frightened that I dropped it on the ground. there was one line I could see on the screen : " Disconnected !" I started to calm down, suddenly, the phone rang again, this time was a message. I picked it up and started to read, it said:" run towards the wood, you'll see an old wooden house, then get inside, another clue is waiting for you...." my heart beat like a drum and the goose bumps spread through my arms and belly after I’d read it. My dog’s bark seemed to wake me up. I got my control back, thought of things’d happened. “ why am I involved in these stuffs? what’s going on? The scrary grin and the message? “ I still could not guess what’s happening no matter how hard I tried. There was no choice, I could go home, and ignored all of them. “ But what if someone needs help” I thought. After a few minutes, I decided to join the game, no matter what it was ...
To be continued...
p/s : correct my grammar if you see teacher, :) , thank you !
Very nice writing again Cong!
A few comments:
...this time there was a message.
...towards the woods.
...my heart was beating like a drum. I like this sentence Cong!
I'm interested to see what happens next in the game. You've left us with a real cliffhanger! When will we see part 2?