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Permalink Reply by coco on September 18, 2012 at 14:52

I was alone at home so I open the door carefully.  Who is this?  Oh my God, what are you doing here in the middle of the night?  What happen to you? My best friend was there at my  front door crying like a child.  He seems to be afraid.  I let him come inside and bring him in the kitchen and give him a glass of water.  What happen to you, calm yourself.  It is okay, you are not alone. He was still crying.  I come back from my work and find my pet dead, he said.  My pet was there near the sofa dead.  I am so sad, what am I going to do without my pet....   I take him in my arm and cannot say anything......

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TeacherPermalink Reply by English Teacher Jamie on September 18, 2012 at 16:22

That's a very sad story. :(  It sounds like the start of a thriller or tragedy.

You'll have to tell us what happened to his pet!

I like your writing style Coco. Have you written stories before?

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Permalink Reply by coco on September 18, 2012 at 16:36

Thank you very much Teacher!  I just like to write and I think I have a little imagination sometime.  I write it fast when I see this topic this morning. It is nice that you tell me that because  I think I always like to write but never do it but this week I begin to write a story for my pleasure just like that, maybe I will never finish it but this time I will try it :)  and I will also try to tell you what happen to the pet soon....

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TeacherPermalink Reply by English Teacher Jamie on September 19, 2012 at 9:17

That's great. Writing is a wonderful way to keep our imagination alive - and to improve our English skills! I look forward to seeing the next instalment.

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Permalink Reply by coco on September 19, 2012 at 15:09

I love this kind of topic.   This is the end of my story....  Come I will show you your room, you have to rest now and tomorrow we will see.  On the morning we took his pet to the vetinary for an autopsy.  He died of a high dose of drug, do you have an idea of where it comes, asked the vetinary.  Oh my God. I know said my friend, I know...  Before going to work I dropped my medecine bottle on the floor.  I must have forgotten a pill or two on the floor and he probably find it and ... Oh, my God, poor him...  So we brought his pet back home and we buried him in the garden.  What a sad morning...   :)

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TeacherPermalink Reply by English Teacher Jamie on September 19, 2012 at 18:31

This is definitely a sad story now. It's also a story with a good message - be careful with your pets! 

I will add a new story telling topic soon. I'm happy to know that you enjoy this activity. I can see you have a very active imagination. I look forward to reading more of your stories!

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Permalink Reply by coco on September 19, 2012 at 18:38

Thank you Teacher!  This activity is great... it is a  very good idea, I love it very much...

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Permalink Reply by wavingfree on September 20, 2012 at 17:15

I have to agree with Teacher Jamie, a very sad story, very well written and very imaginative.

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Permalink Reply by coco on September 25, 2012 at 20:41

Thanks Wavingfree!

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Permalink Reply by Blue Peace on September 21, 2012 at 19:40

:(( If I were in that situation, I wouldn't know how to make him feel better too....

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Permalink Reply by coco on September 25, 2012 at 20:44

Yes, it is a sad situation.  I didn't really realize that my story was so sad... :)

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Permalink Reply by Di on September 18, 2012 at 18:26

It was the middle of an ordinary night and I was sleeping peacefully. All of a sudden I was woken up by a knock on the front door! Who could be visiting at this time of night? I ran downstairs and opened the door. I couldn't believe my eyes! Waiting at the door was......

a man, but he was very interesting dressed. And it was very incredible, but there was a sword in his hand. Then I learned that he was from 17 century, and he didn't know how he appereared in our century. He was shoked. I invited him in my house, i wasn't afraid, because my brother was at home. Next day he began to see our live, it was very interesting to look how he was glad to to see that in our century we have such incredible things as facks, mobile phones, iPad and other. And he adapted in our life and now he lives with us.

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