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Permalink Reply by coco on March 13, 2012 at 21:01

Hi, Gertraud.  Thank you for this beautiful message.  Thank also for your advice.  Springtime lethargy, nice word. This is what I feel.  I will eat more fruits and vegetable. People also wear more smile.  You will make me like spring by the way you write it.  :)  Thank again for this beautiful message of energy. 

Permalink Reply by Rungthip on April 1, 2012 at 19:38

My country,Thailand, is in tropical zone. Certainly there are two seasons that is the rainy season and summer. In Thailand summer the weather is very hot that is the reason why I don't like to go to anywhere in summer. In the rain season I like the period of raining. While it is raining, the temperature is very nice, it's not too hot and cold. I like to play the rain at outdoor with my friends. 

1. My favourite season is autumn. Although I never stayed in the weather of autumn and never seen the real autumn, I know it from television, movie and picture. It is the  fantastic season. Every tree, every where is in the same tone is brown. I only see in the picture it is beautiful. I hope to see it by myself.

2. My country has  2 seasons. Thus I never lived in 4 season.  When I was young. I like to play the harvest game that it this game has 4 seasons. First seasons is spring, I am a gardener in this game, many flowers start to bloom. Everything looks like fresh. Second season is summer, I see in everything the game  is a fun season. Third season is autumn, this season I see in the game, its location give a romantic feel. The last season  is winter. everything in the game is white. I feel this season is the rest reason.   

Teacher, my English is very bad. Please help me improve this opinion. Thank you :)

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Permalink Reply by fang on April 2, 2012 at 2:18

Good morning, My dear :) 

I'm very glad to see your comment here.

  Keep up your good job. ^_______^ 

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TeacherPermalink Reply by English Teacher Jamie on April 2, 2012 at 6:14

Let me first of all say your writing is not very bad. It's very easy to read, the sentences are structured well and there are very few mistakes. I'm a little busy today but I'll be back online later to add some more comments about your English. Great writing Ping!

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TeacherPermalink Reply by English Teacher Jamie on April 11, 2012 at 13:54

Hi, here are some comments about your English. Sorry for the delay!

is in tropical zone - is in a/the tropical zone (don't forget to use an article)

it's not too hot and cold. - it's not too hot or too cold.

Every tree, every where is in the same tone is brown. - same tone of brown (we say tone of something)

Thus I never lived in 4 season. - Thus I have never lived with 4 seasons (don't forget to use s with regular plural nouns)

I like to play the harvest game that it this game has 4 seasons. - I like to play the harvest game and this game has 4 seasons.

Everything looks like fresh. - Everything looks fresh.

 

I look forward to seeing your next passage of writing soon! I hope that you will be able to experience Autumn in the future. Is there somewhere special you would like to see Autumn for the first time?

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Permalink Reply by Rungthip on April 11, 2012 at 14:41

Thank you teacher for your comment :)

I hope to go Japan.

I like to see the leaves of changing  color  and like their culture.

Their culture is polite and soft such as greeting, tea making and traditional clothes.

I love Chinese tea especially wu long tea. How about you?

In my high school classroom, I used to learn America history about Boston Tea Party.

(It makes me know tea is very important for British./ I got some information tea is very important for British.) teacher which one of this is correct.

 Have you ever drunk Chinese tea? 

What about difference between Chinese tea or British tea? 

 Do you like drink tea?

Could you please correct my mistakes. Thanks :)

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TeacherPermalink Reply by English Teacher Jamie on April 11, 2012 at 15:18

In England we love tea. We have tea for breakfast and tea during the day. The tea that we drink is hot tea with milk. The tea leaves usually come from India or Malaysia. Is Chinese tea the same as green tea? I'm not sure. I'm drinking a cup of tea now. :) It helps us keep warm!

What kind of tea do you like to drink?

I hope to go Japan. - I hope to go to Japan.

America history about Boston Tea Party. -  American history about the Boston Tea Party. (we use the adjective form of the country when talking about history, culture, food or language)

teacher which one of this is correct. - these

Do you like drink tea? - Do you like to drink tea?

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Permalink Reply by Rungthip on April 15, 2012 at 6:24

Thank you teacher.

I will bring your advice to develop my writing :)

 

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TeacherPermalink Reply by English Teacher Jamie on April 15, 2012 at 16:59

You're welcome! I'm glad to hear it.

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Permalink Reply by pooja on April 17, 2012 at 18:48

today's here is summer season. and there  sir?

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TeacherPermalink Reply by English Teacher Jamie on April 17, 2012 at 19:02

In England today it is spring season. We have April showers - a lot of rain!

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Permalink Reply by Gertraud Müller on April 22, 2012 at 19:47

Now it is spring in my country. I love this season although the weather is changeable. It's suny and warm and rainy and cold. All this can happen during one day.

Yesterday I was walking and took some nice picture. It was cloudy but warm. The colors are very intense in spring, the fruit trees bloom and lots of bees buzzing around. I took a rest in front of  an apple tree and was listening to this special sound it's like a music. The blooms of the tree have smelled wonderful.

Today , I woke up and I have heard the raindrops knocking on my window. This is spring in Austria.

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