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Permalink Reply by edriany puji on October 4, 2011 at 11:16

i'm the type of person who always stop at the hole in the wall every times i go hang out. i love to put my money in the bank but can't control myself to withdrawn it in the other side.

 

is my sentence correct ,Sir?

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TeacherPermalink Reply by English Teacher Jamie on October 4, 2011 at 13:15

I'm the type of person who always stops at the hole in the wall every time I go and hang out. I love to put my money in the bank but can't control myself when I withdraw it from the other side.

 

A couple of small changes; don't forget your capitals! :)

 

It's always tempting to withdraw a little extra and have some fun!

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